I don’t know how to express my feelings or to describe something in ways that bring to mind a picture of what is going on. I use short sentences and frequently have sentences or paragraphs that stutter, for lack of a better way to put it.
My writing is like that of a child learning to write sentences. Short, to the point. I use commas as breaks in my writing to show a pause.
I would like to get better at eliciting images when telling a story but am not sure how to go about it. Using actual pictures is easier.
Oh well at least I am trying!